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i colored my line art submitted i think a month ago, anyway, im not so impressed with the coloring i've done. i wanted to add another layer of light/shade, but it makes my work look worse. i need some comments and suggestions on how to improve my coloring. i specifically chose not to use any gradients and spray brushes. wanted to try "cel shading". please advice:D will gladly appreciate

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:iconphistolemon:
well, I'm not an expert in coloring... never did that, buuuut I think it looks good enough - well done, really :)
:iconwestwinds:
hehe salamat sa pagfave! though honestly nabibitin ako sa gawa ko, di ko lam kung ano pa gagawin dun.

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:iconwestwinds:
thanks. i wish i could figure out how to improve on it though.:)

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:iconrookyraude:
asteeg :headbang: nice one!

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:iconwestwinds:
salamat :D. pls hingi tulong sa shading. pano improve?

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:iconbluehazard:
ang ganda kaya ng concept! alam ko na... you should make a comic strip out of it! :headbang:
:icond3c3it:
aba.. cell shade! ayos to.. kaso..

highlights men. laging ganun.

shadows.midtones.highlights.

try mo rin mag tri-coloring .. ung mga slits ng kulay na mag madilim ng 2-3 shades from tha shadow tone. chaka ang minimal nung shadow.. halimbawa sa pants, bakit ung gilid lang ung may shadow.. e pano naman ung mga portion sa may bandang waist part? di ba natatabunan ng shirt un? e di dapat may shadows. kasi kung ung side lang ang nilagyan mo.. mukha lang suyang desyn dun sa pants.

ung blackboard sa likod.. di ba dapat may shadows nung mga characters sa foreground?

ung grim reaper/with/death thingy. bakit flats lang ung kulay? asan ung shadows dun sa damit nya?

ung sahig. bakit walang shadows nung mga characters? brown-out ba?


ayun.. yan ung mga nakita kong pede mo pang i-improve ..sana makatulong :)

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:iconwestwinds:
AYUN!!! super salamat, yun kelangan ko. iisa isahin ko yung advice mo. takot actually ako magcell shading kasi parang lost utak ko kung saan dapat istop yung shade, di tulad gradient madaya HAHAHAHA. salamat talaga:D

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